The blood-stained rocky terrain, often blamed for cutting bare, unprotected feet,
wonders why those who chose paths both unusual and alluring
were not prepared to face the sharpness of accumulated pain.
The rocks hold so much character, each atom carrying memories of bygone eras, hard lessons etched into their grain.
They know they will stand alone, while the world walks over them, never stopping to feel the ache of the path that bore thousands toward their destinations.
Unmoved, misunderstood, they remain— silent witnesses to endurance.
And I, too, am such terrain
-scarred, steadfast, my jagged edges misunderstood, yet every fracture holds a story, every wound a truth.
One day, perhaps the world will pause
in the stillness,
the rocks and I will finally be seen.

Brilliant imagery and some jagged truths, Reena! So well written. ❤️
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Thanks a ton, Punam!
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My pleasure, Reena.
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A quiet but powerful ending highlighting our endurance. Great write Reena 👏
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Thank you so much, Shaun!
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Great use of metaphors, lovely language for a tough subject. Well done.
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Thank you so much!
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thank you for showing yourself. that helps.
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Thank you!
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Reena this is a powerful, somber piece you masterfully use geological metaphors to explore human resilience and the isolation of being ‘the foundation’ for others🙌
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Thanks a ton, Ange!
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♥️
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There are penetrating truths inscribed in the imagery (brilliant as always), Reena, especially as the terrain and the traverser become one and the same. Each carved and carving. This makes one wonder if we are as free as we think we are in the choice of the terrain of our lives and the paths we take.
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Thanks a ton for the detailed reading and comment, Dora!
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What are the greatest fears of finally being understood?
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Pertinent question!
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