Two-timing winds sweep across seasons
I wrap a shawl around my shoulders
as tourists camera-chase a moving beast
dark-listing swift leopards as they smile at
omnipresent, boring barasinghas
The forest is no easy place to be
when clouds shield a late-coming sun
I stretch my palms to see what I can catch
Streaming down between the leaves
I catch nothing more than disappointment
etched out by thorny twigs on the Fate Line
as the SUV speeds by on rocky patches
I won’t even try to extend an uncertain lifeline
unsupported as it is by a web of disbelief
peace-brokering agreements with truth
I’ve reached a terminus where lights are dim
just enough to cross the borders of life
P.S.
Barasinghas are 12-antlered deer dotting the forest landscape

‘I’ve reached a terminus where lights are dim
just enough to cross the borders of life’
Great take, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Indira!
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hi, Reena❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted for the very first time by the lovely Sheila Bair, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/11/06/w3-prompt-132-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy 🎉
Much love,
David
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Thanks!
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*hug*
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Reena, your poem beautifully captures the complexities of nature and emotion! I love how you weave imagery and reflection together—it really brings the experience to life.
~David
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Thanks a ton, David!
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Wonderful, Reena. I especially like these lines:
“The forest is no easy place to be
when clouds shield a late-coming sun
I stretch my palms to see what I can catch
Streaming down between the leaves”
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Thank you, Melissa!
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Beautiful take! It’s been fun to see such varied results from this prompt.
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth! It means a lot.
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Masterful use of the prompts!! I am wowed by this one Reena! ❤
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Thank you so much, Val!
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A strong poem that brooks no brokering with truth.
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Thank you, D.Avery!
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Oh so well done Reena 👍🏼👌🏼👏🏼
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Thanks so much!
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You’re most welcome
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Love your response poem to both prompts!
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Thanks again!
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Our truth is hidden in the dark.
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That’s true. Thank you, Diana!
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🙂💯
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