He failed again … and she rejoiced. She gyrated on one foot in a celebratory jig, and froze in shock. Her nemesis was standing right behind her.
“So you thought I’d given up?”
“You don’t stand to gain by doing that.”
“Well, I must give you credit for that. You have developed a great perception of reality.”
“What can be a showstopper?”
“You mean deal-breaker? I have been promised a fortune for your head.”
“Name your price…”
“You…”
She swung around and jumped down from the balcony. It was all over in a fleeting moment. He looked at a the mangled heap of flesh and bones on the ground. Well, he could still claim that he pushed her over the edge…..
The damned watch had a recording device, and the police got hold of it. She was determined not to lose.
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> Reena Saxena posted: “He failed again … and she rejoiced. She gyrated on > one foot in a celebratory jig, and froze in shock. Her nemesis was standing > right behind her. “So you thought I’d given up?” “You don’t stand to gain > by doing that.” “Well, I must give you credit for ” >
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Great twist!!
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Thanks!
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That would show him.
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Great conversation between the characters . Loved your take!
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Thanks, Shivangi!
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Great take Reena, insurance in case of death…..clever ending.
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Thanks!
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Amazed at the ending! 🙂
Choosing personal victory over life!
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We never know what drives life and death 😊
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Indeed! 🙂
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LOL! She won in the end even though she is destroyed. Great story, Reena!
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Thanks, Joy!
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You left some details out. I’m intrigued to why the pursuit. Nicely done
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Thanks! Whose pursuit?
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He was obviuosly after her or so it seems
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Yeah… that is left to imagination. But it also drives her extreme response.
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Excellent, Reena. You write so well.
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Thank you so much, Indira!
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