TRAPPED POEM

Posted on by Reena Saxena

A poem trapped in yellowing pages calls
how readers interpret, induces new thoughts
accretion of layers on a moment’s expression
Dynamic formats fit – but what’s authentic?

how readers interpret, induces new thoughts
A poem enriched, yet starved of its soul
Dynamic formats fit – but what’s authentic?
Collective experience changes the world

A poem enriched, yet starved of its soul
A poem trapped in yellowing pages calls
Collective experience changes the world
accretion of layers on a moment’s expression

W3 Prompt #228

32 thoughts on “TRAPPED POEM”

  6. Nice prompt this week Reena. The pantoum is so intriguing as it seems to develop its own momentum and reveal a little about its theme as it evolves, altering…. I really enjoyed your exploration of this poetry form itself and, for me, feels it will never be trapped in time, as readers will continue to read with new thoughts, no matter what age, and that’s a paradox as although the poem can be appreciated for years, the initial meaning may be lost as the poet loses control and readers themselves change … really enjoyed this one. Thanks Reena 💞

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  12. This is such a clever meta-poem, Reena 📜✨ Using the pantoum’s repetition to explore how a poem’s meaning shifts with every re-reading is such a smart pairing of form and theme. Really sets the bar for this week’s challenge!

    — Khadija 🤍

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      1. That makes sense Reena — sometimes a poem written just to illustrate a form ends up saying more than it was ever meant to, which is a nice kind of accident. Looking forward to seeing what everyone builds from the example!

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