I’m not sure if my grandparents’ house could be called a villa, but this picture comes very close. The steep stairs led to the terrace, where memories stay parked to date.
lost childhood
groans under the weight
of smartness
The gate was our boundary during the summer vacation, but the mischief that happened behind it was boundless. The tiniest leaf or flower was a friend. I recall apologising to the plants for burying grotesque stuff in the soil beneath, and watering them every day to see what would sprout.
roots raise heads
in alien soil
long ghosted
Life took us far beyond those brick walls and boundaries, but a part of our roots stays buried there – undervalued yet alive.
libraries
where young minds blossomed
undusted

Such a lovely take on the prompt Reena! So so different from mine but similar too as we have both touched on memory and nostalgia. The house, the soft pastels do touch the hearts in a very special way.
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I guess this image has a very retro feel to it.
Thanks for engaging with the story!
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Lost childhood groaning under the weight of smartness yes. But roots that stay buried in alien soil, long ghosted but alive. Libraries where young minds bloomed undusted. You didn’t lose it, Reena. You carry it. That part behind the brick walls knows exactly who you became. Beautiful piece. 💙
Much love,
Khadija 💕🤗
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Thank you so much for the generous comment!
I don’t know why your comments are landing in Spam, so pardon the delay in responding. I don’t check Spam every day, but I’m making it a habit now.
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Many people say my comment lands in spam , no idea it’s a glitch may be 🙈
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🥰
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Oh! I also linked this villa to my grandpa’s house in my imagination and wrote something similar. 😊
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Thank you! There is an old world air about it.
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Beautiful poetry, lost childhood is my favourite.
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That ache always lives within us.
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That was excellent… I really enjoyed that.
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Thanks a ton, Chris!
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A beautiful haibun Reena. Loved the memories you have shared. They have come alive with your words. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks for the appreciation!
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It’s a pleasure my friend
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I love this – your carefully chosen words carry the emotional weight of an entire era ❤️
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Thanks a ton, Ange!
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