The shift from ‘fumbling on faith‘ to ‘choose a space between flowing lines’ is what got me, like you’re naming that moment when you stop trying to fit into anyone else’s pattern and start carving out your own. That ‘unseen path’ line especially.
Do you think people can see our journeys even when we’re not on the expected routes, or does choosing individuality mean accepting invisibility too? 💙
Hi Reena, It’s just a bit of fun, we will pretend that we are all in the Cafe and go up by the microphone. Although I am going to dither about and maybe actually say I am about to write a poem. Okay?
Pondering over this, Reena.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Carry on 🙂
LikeLike
I dwelt on this for some time –
’choose a space
between flowing lines’ –
so evocative 🩷
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hope it makes sense to you 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes 🙌
LikeLiked by 1 person
The shift from ‘fumbling on faith‘ to ‘choose a space between flowing lines’ is what got me, like you’re naming that moment when you stop trying to fit into anyone else’s pattern and start carving out your own. That ‘unseen path’ line especially.
Do you think people can see our journeys even when we’re not on the expected routes, or does choosing individuality mean accepting invisibility too? 💙
Nicely put in words dear.
LikeLiked by 1 person
IMO, we accept invisibility + being slammed for whatever is visible.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Damned if invisible, damned if seen and we choose visibility anyway.
LikeLiked by 2 people
You are so right 😦
LikeLiked by 1 person
Interesting poem, art is subjective.
LikeLiked by 2 people
True. Thank you, Diana!
LikeLiked by 1 person
😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very nicely done, Reena!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a ton, Chris!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi, Chris! Somehow, my replies and questions to Clark are not getting posted.
Please help me with what I need to do for the Poetry Slam? Write a poem in six sentences using the word “word” in the Cafe context?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi Reena, It’s just a bit of fun, we will pretend that we are all in the Cafe and go up by the microphone. Although I am going to dither about and maybe actually say I am about to write a poem. Okay?
LikeLike
Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
choose a space between flowing lines…
individuality is a beautiful thing. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Nigel! 😄
LikeLike
Lovely take Reena. Thank you for joining in.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sadje!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wonderfil piece, Reena! 👍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Aptivi!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome, Reena!
LikeLiked by 1 person