mind creaks
patterns repeat
hope starts falling apart
insanity prevails; keeps all
doors shut
Cyclic
mind creaks
patterns repeat
hope starts falling apart
insanity prevails; keeps all
doors shut
It’s agony to be in that state. Good lines, Reena!
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Thank you, Susi!
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You’re welcome!
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This is one you can ponder for awhile. Nice writing, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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good one Reena, so deep and very relatable to me!
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I’m always happy to know someone can relate to my thoughts.
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Wonderfully profound, Reena. Brava!
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome, Reena.
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Brilliant sensory poem.
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Thanks for the perspective! It adds value because sensory was not on mind when I wrote it.
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🥰
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I love the self imposed mental blockade. This is very profound, Reena.
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Thank you, Nigel! Insanity is about refusing to see beyond a point, or imagining stuff out side the boundaries of logic by developing your own logic.
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This is very true.
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A thought provoking poem Reena. I hope the summer and heat waves don’t drive people towards madness. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re very welcome
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Good one, Reena!
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Thanks so much! Glad you liked it.
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Striking Reena – I like how you move insanity from being simply an emotional state to a claustrophobic force that seals off escape 🙌
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It is claustrophobic because it is a kind of thought process stalemate or mental block.
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❤️
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Excellent! 👍
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Thanks!
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You’re most welcome! ☺️
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👏💗🤗
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Thanks!
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🤗💖
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