Success in circuit lies
hard work, honesty beget success
Demonstrated, deeply ingrained in
my nubile mind’s receptive circuit
-Woke consciousness junks the lies
The Truth’s superb surprise
they worship sleeping gods, but the
priest chooses silence in Truth’s
deepest interest; life’s gift is superb
the end will reveal a deserved surprise
Lines chosen for the Golden Shovel are from Emily Dickinson’s poem, shared by Jodi
Tell all the truth but tell it slant —
Success in Circuit lies
Too bright for our infirm Delight
The Truth’s superb surprise
As Lightning to the Children eased
With explanation kind
The Truth must dazzle gradually
Or every man be blind —
Creative Experiments and More 
hi, Reena❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Jaideep, is live until Monday (July 20):
Much love,
David
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Thank you!
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*hug*
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I love how both of them landed with a bit of modern-day wisdom
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Thank you! Most of us wonder what the end will bring. I hope the journey feels worthwhile.
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Gorgeous! The first poem coupled with the second are perfect as extended coin poems as well as a Golden Shovel. Wonderful!
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Thank you so much, Val! Glad you liked it.
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‘Awareness takes things to a different level.’ Agreed. Both responses are superb.
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Thank you! 😃
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💝💝💝
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Reena, what stands out most for me is how you show truth like a light in the mind, helping us see past lies and wait for the final surprise!
~David
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We don’t really know how much is incubating inside us. Awareness takes things to a different level.
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