one act
one million opinions
meshed mindsets
clashing versions
floating on virtual clouds
raining on reality
Life chokes
one poem
one imagination
weaving metaphors
oxygen for spirit
lyrics reverberate
a note resonates
Life breaths
one lens
one world
mind, body, soul
unified whole
folding inwards
to protect
Life’s reasons
Awesome poem
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome
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unified whole
folding inwards
to protect
Life’s reasons
You rounded it off so beautifully Reena! Making its mark in a Pablo Neruda style!
Hank
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That’s a great compliment! 🙂 Thanks a lot, Hank!
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From conflict to calm, the repeating “one” gives your poem a grounded, meditative pulse, Reena. Excellent 👏
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Thank you so much, Shaun!
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Very thought provoking, Reena, and beautifully written…
Have a great Summer break!
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Thank you, Frewin!
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I love that part of unifying the whole self. Happy summer!
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Wishing you the same 🙂
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Beautifully written Reena
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Thank you!
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You’re most welcome my friend
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Very nice.
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Thank you so much!
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Nice one, Reena, and the repetition of ‘one’ is effective, focusing the reader and the poem on the ‘oxygen for spirit’ and the resonating note, a mantra.
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Thank you so much, Kim!
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My pleasure, Reena!
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Yes…maybe for some it is like breathing.
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Yes. Thank you, Bjorn!
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This is very insightful 💖
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A piece of philosophy. Best wishes, Michael
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Thank you so much, Michael!
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