A patriarch lies there
bludgeoned to death by a club
in the shape of a woman
bystanders frozen in shock
recall interactions
-foresee a dark future
Is it a fear
or a nightmare that will dissolve
at dawn?
A shadow steps out of home
Is that a woman
howling?
petals in garlands
turn to flames
long-held concepts on fire
turning to ashes
before the incinerator shrieks.
Freedom at lastโฆ
CAPPING SENRYU
Ashes on the pyre
lighter than illusions โ glow
with newfound freedom

You are welcome
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Striking Reena – Great resonance – mirroring the transition from the physical crime to the spirituality of the aftermath – freedom. I love that you suggest that the very existence of the feminine has become the instrument that dismantles the old order! ๐
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You got it right. Thank you so much!
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A powerful story Reena
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Thank you so much!
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Youโre very welcome
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Delightfully dark!
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True that.
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Beautiful Reena ๐๐๏ธ
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Thanks a ton!
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A powerful punch to this poem.
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Thank you so much!
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