This is wonderfully concise yet powerful. In just a few lines, you’ve captured a vivid image and a deep philosophical idea—the sudden flash of justice paired with the quiet reminder of karma lingers in the mind long after reading. I especially admire how your words leave space for reflection, inviting the reader to pause and look inward. A striking and thought-provoking piece.
Karma can be wicked. I think though that most who experence ‘retaliation’ karma, still think the negativity isn’t their fault.
Those who watch their step and advance kindess aren’t looking for good karma either – they just continue being good.
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You are right. The direct connect never really shows up. There are assumptions and conclusions.
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Yes! So good Reena! Xo
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Thank you, Carol!
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Wow! Superb!
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Thank you so much!
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Love your Haiku.
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Thanks, Diana!
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You’re welcome.
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This is wonderfully concise yet powerful. In just a few lines, you’ve captured a vivid image and a deep philosophical idea—the sudden flash of justice paired with the quiet reminder of karma lingers in the mind long after reading. I especially admire how your words leave space for reflection, inviting the reader to pause and look inward. A striking and thought-provoking piece.
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Thank you so much, Vermaji!
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You are most welcome.
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Wonderful!
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Aabhari aahe, Rupali!
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🤗
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your haiku, like the lightning’s flash, springs forth such power and imagery. Masterfully done, my friend. Have a blessed and creative day.
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Thanks for stopping by, Jerry! Much appreciated.
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An excellent haiku, Reena!
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Thank you, Chris!
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This is very poetic and surreal …I do feel what you have expressed.
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Glad that you resonate with it. Thanks so much!
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A beautiful haiku Reena. Thank you so much for joining in
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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