I will be somewhere there beyond your reach I’m sure no one is going to miss me I will carry bits of my cracked-up soul move on swiftly into light -only me
I like the lines ‘somewhere therebeyond your reach’. They leave room for meanderig thoughts and images. In all a very contemplating, soulful poem. I like it!
hi, Reenaβ£οΈ
Just wanna let you know that our weekly W3, hosted by our beloved Shaun Tenzenmen, is live until tomorrow (Monday):
https://skepticskaddish.com/2026/02/04/w3-prompt-197-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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I feel the resolve in βbits of my cracked-up soul,β and βinto light β only / meβ reads to me like hard-won self-claiming.
~David
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Thank you, David!
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*hug!*
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Lovely take, Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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Reena this is good! I love the image of being beyond reach and in the end alone and safe (at least that’s my take)!
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Your take is right. I look forward to being in this state.
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Love the resilience in this poem, Reena!
Yvette M Calleiro π
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Thank you so much!
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You take us with you on this journey π
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Thank you for being there π€
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I love this!
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Thank you, Kaci!
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This carries a sense of strength and forward motion despite the image of pain. Nice write Reena π
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Thank you, Shaun!
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I like the lines ‘somewhere therebeyond your reach’. They leave room for meanderig thoughts and images. In all a very contemplating, soulful poem. I like it!
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Thank you so much!
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Very moving poem
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It is the journey of a soul.
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Indeed πππΌπ
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