Someone pushed me from the deck,
and the world tilted
air fled my lungs,
the bridge behind me crumbled into dust,
and the ship sailed on
as if I had never stood upon it.
In the hush beneath the surface,
a force gathered itself from currents,
slowly taking form.
On the far bank, it rose
a silhouette I knew before I saw
It is me here, and it was me there,
split only by the river
and the moment I let go.
Now I stand between two tides
one pulling me back
to the person I once carried,
one urging me forward
to the person I am becoming.
Looking back, I see the fall.
Looking forward, I see the rise.

Wow! Excellent writing, as usual.
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Thanks again!
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My pleasure.
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I love the last lines Reena, xo
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Thank you, Carol!
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Another great write Reena 👏
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Thanks for another superlative compliment, Shawn!
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That moment between tides? That’s where so many of us are standing. Well written.
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Insightful comment!
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Beautifully penned
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Thanks for dropping by, Adarsh!
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You captured that crucial moment of self-realisation beautifully, Reena.
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Thank you, Punam!
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My pleasure, Reena.
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Awesome poem Reena
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Thanks so much!
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You’re most welcome
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I love this, Reena. Reminds me of the Phoenix rising from the ashes! Sometimes we need that push off the deck to help us find our own strength. Well done.
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Thank you, Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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There are those pivotal moments—- and what really matter is what comes next (not why we fall)
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True. Thank you, Bjorn!
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Love your beautiful poem, the strength to look into a future.
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Thank you, Diana!
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❤️
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“a silhouette I knew before I saw
It is me here, and it was me there”
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Thanks ❤️❤️
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