Leaves lose their greens; reveal a brighter core
they embellish the Planet; then it’s time to go
Across fields and oceans, the seasons murmur
Fall is the word; Winds are the messenger
they embellish the Planet; then it’s time to go
Earth’s secrets covered, beyond human reach
Fall is the word; Winds are the messenger
roots whisper; underground links prosper
Earth’s secrets covered, beyond human reach
Leaves lose their greens; reveal a brighter core
roots whisper; underground links prosper
Across fields and oceans, the seasons murmur
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Hi, Reena❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Marion Horton, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/11/05/w3-prompt-184-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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🥪🌮🥂🤣
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🤤
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Reena, this poem is so soothing – a gentle cycle of seasons!
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So glad you liked it, Val!
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It is a really good poem!
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❤️❤️
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I love how it circles like the seasons, Reena — “roots whisper; underground links prosper” feels alive!
~David
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Thank you, David!
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*hug*
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The pantoum is perfect for the images you have created. I especially like “Fall is the word; Winds are the messenger” (K)
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Thank you so much, Kerfe!
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Beautiful pantoum.
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Thank you so much!
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lovely form, and fitting the theme very nicely!
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Thank you, Artie!
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Beautiful poem, Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure, dear.
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I like this form – is it a cascade poem?
Nicely done Reena. 👏
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Thank you, Shaun! This is a Pantoum.
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Lovely as always
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A million thanks, Selma!
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✨ you’re welcome
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So beautiful
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome
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Reena, a poignant reflection on the beauty of nature’s rhythms and its wisdom, creating a rich tapestry of sound and meaning💞
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Thanks a ton, Ange!
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I love your poem, Reena. This is my favorite line:
Fall is the word; Winds are the messenger
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Thank you, Elizabeth! That is the key line.
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such quiet beauty and harmony in this.
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Thank you, Jude!
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