the house sparkles
food looks yum
her back aches
but who cares?
She sweeps the backyard
the cracker-ash strewn all over
reminds her
of a creative spark
she had with words and paints
but who cares?
Primariness matters
In creative choice
But who decides?
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Indeed! No one cares and she does not have the liberty to decide. Well said.
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Thank you, Punam!
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Well done, and a worthy message.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome, Reena.
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We have to care, or even better share the workload.
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Absolutely. Thanks, Bjorn!
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Reena, intriguing questions. Who cares? Who decides?
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It is only the woman who should care for herself and decide.
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I understand where you’re coming from, but nobody exists in a vacuum?
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True. Then it becomes a larger battle to protect your space.
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I hope her family cares, for all her effort.
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True. Thanks, Diana!
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🥰
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Interesting questions you pose Reena. We have all the answers.
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Thanks so much, Shaun!
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I felt the yearning in these lines, Reena, which remind me of my mother:
‘the cracker-ash strewn all over
reminds her
of a creative spark
she had with words and paints’.
We care.
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Thank you so much, Kim!
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You’re most welcome,, Reena!
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luv the varistion and feptition of the prompt throughout
much♡love
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Thank you so much!
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very nice.
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Thanks!
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