I’m not inebriated, just a little dizzy.
losing myself in an ocean
Is an addiction
No judgment
No expectations
Swaying to sound
inhaling smoke
dimmed consciousness
awakening spirits
I’m not an addict, just a seeker.
I’m not inebriated, just a little dizzy.
losing myself in an ocean
Is an addiction
No judgment
No expectations
Swaying to sound
inhaling smoke
dimmed consciousness
awakening spirits
I’m not an addict, just a seeker.
Great poem. Love the last line!
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome
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Tee-hee, that last line… perfect!! Super poem, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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Reena, superb writing. Your finale is stunning.
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Thanks a ton, Eugi!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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“I’m not inebriated, just a little dizzy” made me laugh. I’m seldom inebriated, often dizzy thanks to health issues. It could get me down, but most of the time it’s hilarious. Next time someone asks why I’m swaying, I’m going to tell them “I’m just a seeker”. Thanks!
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Thanks 😃😃
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Reena, you capture this scene so well and I love the last line ‘I’m not an addict, just a seeker.’ – fabulous🙌
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Thanks a ton, Ange! Much appreciated.
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💕
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I’m not inebriated, just dizzy is a lovely line.
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Thank you, Diana!
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perfect!
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Thanks!
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This has such an amazing feel of being in this scene. I love it. 💙
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Thanks so much, Nancy! Glad it resonated with you.
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You’re welcome, Reena (but I’m Lesley 🤗)
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I’m so sorry. 🙏
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Glad I’m not the only one who does this🤗💖
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🙌💕
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Reena, I particularly like how “losing myself in an ocean / Is an addiction” holds both escape and seeking—it makes the ending hit harder for me.
~David
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Thank you, David!
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What a profound take Reena- I’m not an addict, just a seeker- great line. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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