silence
between sharp words; terrifies
the knowledge seeker. Thoughts
converge – in a moment
of acceptance. He is no good
but holds potential to excel, if
the teacher condescends. A sudden
Pause
he walks away, determined not
to demean himself. He would
learn, and not give a thumb. Guru
stunned
Image and Story credit: Boldsky
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hi, Reena❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Michelle, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/10/01/w3-prompt-179-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Done 👍
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What a strong mythological narrative with excellent enjambment.
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Thanks so much! It means a lot.
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A most effective poem, Reena.
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Thanks a million, Robbie!
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This flows so well. Nicely done, Reena!
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth!
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Reena, this one really resonates with me—the way silence shifts from fear to dignity feels so powerful. It’s given me a lot to reflect on.
~David
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Thank you, David! Devotion is not the ultimate destination; it can only be a path to self-realization. But people often stop at devotion and mess up concepts.
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I love this approach! And the rhythm is great!! That last line – stunned into silence!
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Thank you so much, Val!
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I love your retelling of the story, Reena. ❤️
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Thank you, Punam! It has a twist at the end.
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Wow, this is great
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Thank you so much, Christine!
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Lovely, Reena!
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Thanks so much!
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Great execution to the prompt, Reena. 🙌🏽
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Thank you, Selma!
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Reena, a great poem, the tension between silence, speech, assertion, and humiliation is emotionally compelling🙌
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Thank you so much, Ange!
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You are very welcome 💕
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Ah, you got the enjambent to flow very well!
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Thank you so much, Kim!
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I love this Reena🫶
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Thank you so much, Mich!
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