We danced through fire,
kissed storms, chased stars
each love a trial,
each left a scar.
hearts tried many forms
but laughter stayed through the storms.
friendship held us close.
We danced through fire,
kissed storms, chased stars
each love a trial,
each left a scar.
hearts tried many forms
but laughter stayed through the storms.
friendship held us close.
Those two poems explain my marriage! lol Nice job, Reena!
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I should call it collective experience that emanates from a poet’s words 😃
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Yeah, that fits! 🙂
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Two excellent poem, Reena!
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth!
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Both the poems evoke different feelings
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One is experience, the other realisation. 😊
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Great poem, Reena!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Yvette!
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Love this, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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Stories told of love, and friendship with brevity, superb.
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Thank you, Eugi!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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Each left a scar – what a beautiful line.
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Thank you, Diana!
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You’re very welcome
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Nice progression.
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Friendship wins over other versions 😊 No obligations, no defined role expectations.
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Couldn’t agree more, Reena.😄
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❤️❤️
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🥰
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A lovely poem of togetherness Reena. Thank you for joining in.
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Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome 🤗
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