it takes lifetimes
to cross the thresholds
of imposed values
I move on the periphery
of concentric circles
getting mired deeper
in intricacies
of a strange culture
unknown, unacceptable
with a vice-like grip
on breathing patterns
it takes maelstroms
to deplete the lungs
of life-force
I practice Pranayam
to cleanse my existence
trapped in rituals
not of my making
long-limbed shadows
encircle every move
to exhale carbon
spread darkness
it takes an exorcist
to drive out demons
-live just for once

hi, Reena❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by our beloved Jaideep, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/09/10/w3-prompt-176-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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Thanks!
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“mired deeper
in intricacies
of a strange culture
unknown,”
Often a summary of what it is to be human.
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Thank you, Melissa!
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Killer first stanza, Reena. 👏
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Thank you so much!
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This piece has such a raw honesty to it, Reena… like breathing through resistance.
~David
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Thank you, David!
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*hug*
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Reena, your poem creates a deep tension between purification and suffocation – between ritual as a solace but also cage – 🙌
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We create our own rituals to escape others. But you are right that it is a cage. Freedom is exercising choice at every step.
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🙌
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You’ve created a spiral of tension with your imagery. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe!
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Your poem gives me the feelings of hopelessness and of being trapped.
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Thanks, Elizabeth!
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Talking about your practice brings a softness to your words.
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Thank you, Christine!
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A very profound poem Reena. Very moving.
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Thank you so much, Sadje! Glad you liked it.
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You’re most welcome
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excellent writing! ❤ ❤ loved it!
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Thank you, Carol!
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A beautiful poem, it takes talent to write poetry.
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It takes time to develop skills 😊 Talent alone does not help. Thanks, Diana!
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💯❤️
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