Bury the hatchet before saying goodbye
Let love, not languorous rancour, sing a lullaby
See silhouettes on a sunset sky
Past and present pale shadows are passing us by
Complaints, conflicts are so yesterday
Perfect is a perspective, mental inlay
We were ourselves; ditch world views on parting notes
Parting Note

Wonderful.
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Thank you so much!
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Nicely done. 😊
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Thanks!
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Sure thing!
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Fantastic, Reena!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks again, Yvette!
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Fantastic, Reena! Love the perspective, the alliteration and the rhyming. Wise words.
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Thank you so much, Punam!
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My pleasure, Reena.
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perfectly put, Reena…
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Thank you so much, Jaye!
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Well done Reena. Great write.
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Thank you so much!
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Nicely done Reena
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome
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Sage advice, Reena, and your Rhyming Alliterisen is deftly written. I specially love these lines:
‘See silhouettes on a sunset sky
Past and present pale shadows are passing us by’.
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Thank you so much, Kim!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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