When someone is hostile
I often think
what did I do
in a previous lifetime
to leave this wound
that makes them rile?
The ground beneath my feet
moves to lay bare
a throbbing secret
-it can become a quake
-the marks humans leave
are most often scars
I pray to the ocean
forgive our sins
buried in your depths
leash the tsunamis
you nurse underneath
the sky sheds a tear.
something rips it apart
lashing rain
wets my thick skin
makes an attempt
to melt my dead heart
it beats on pacemakers
they cost a fortune
a forest burns
in another continent
-it could not hold its rage
-your acts are sacrilege
In the name of development
labelled sacrament

hi, Reena 😁
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Murisopsis, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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What a powerful poenm, Reena!
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Thank you so much, Brenda!
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Great how you started almost individually then spread to a global scar/hurt.
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Thank you, Christine!
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Reena I love the way this skews from a personal to a global issue! Well done! (and the quote fits in so smoothly that I almost didn’t see it!)
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Thank you so much, Val! It means a lot.
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Very powerful, Reena – you’re on fire!
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Thanks. 🔥
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Very moving poem Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome
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That was amazing, Reena!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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A wonderfully written poem, Reena. Is that your fire painting!?
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No, not mine. Thank you, Dwight!
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:>)
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This is incredibly potent, Reena 💜💜
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Thank you so much, Sanaa!
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Each element coming together to punish us.
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Looks like it 😂
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Every one of the elements could call us to task.
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True. We are GUILTY.
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Reena, this poem is raw and powerful!
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re so welcome.
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powerful piece! Nicely done👏👏👏
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Thank you so much!
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Wow, Reena 👏👏👏 this is powerful
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Thank you so much!
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This truly brings the elements of both man and nature to the fore. Well done Reena.
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Thank you, Violet! Request you to read it again. Only half the poem was copy-pasted.
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Thanks for the heads up… on my way….
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I see now that you weren’t just taking inspiration from the essence of the prompt but using it in the piece. Wonderful. That was what I had in mind, but I do want you to know I knew which literary quote you were sharing the essence of even in its original form.
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Thanks for reading deep into it!
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My pleasure!
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very well said… and to the point!
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Thanks, Jaye and Anita! But that was only half the poem.
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There was more? I’m coming back!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Wow! So much powerful imagery. Well done!
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Thanks so much!
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Reena, this poem feels so intense and raw. The imagery of nature reflecting inner turmoil is powerful.
Much love,
David
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Thanks, David! Request a second look. I’d copy pasted only half the poem.
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Oh that’s even better now, Reena!
The tension between human actions and nature’s response is powerful, especially the metaphor of the forest burning.
~David
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Thanks again!
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I like the combination of elements in your poem, Reena, and that you started it with tsunamis nursed underneath the sea. I also love the image of the sky shedding a tear.
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Let me correct this first. I’ve copy-pasted part of the poem. Sorry.
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No problem, Reena.
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Interesting
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