overvaluation
happens
within closed circles
frogs in wells
set amphibian rules
for terrestrial, aquatics
and aviators
standard operating procedures
obstruct excellence
beyond boundaries
I set new rules every day.
-no change or deletion
life accelerates
on positive paths
whatever is left behind
is an irrelevant past
overcoming is not a negation

Beautifully done, Reena 🩷🩷
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Thank you so much, Sanaa!
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Just wanted to bring to your notice that someone called Harish Equbal is sending emails to ask for your contact details. He vaguely knows about dVerse.
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This really has me thinking!
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I like this response 😊 Thanks!
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Very nicely done, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Dwight!
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You are very welcome!
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LOVE your attitude, Reena! Brava.
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Thank you, Helen!
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To confine ourselves to rules is often needed, but I would prefer to be able to write my own rules too.
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Thank you, Bjorn! Certain tasks would not get done if each individual in the team is given a free hand. Hence, rules are necessary, but can suffocate without a logic.
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This was amazing Reena! Well done a wonderful poem!
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Thank you so much, Carol!
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Very well written Reena
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Thanks again 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Life is a consistent battle for control- be it over society, the environment, inanimate objects, your fellow or yourself. It sounds harsh, but I think if you look closely, you will find it to be true. very thought-provoking post, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Violet!
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