a new day shapes up
intangible horizons
rebuff eager grips
hands struggling to hold; remould
a hazy future to bright
-Vision transcends only what the mind can comprehend-
comfort zones beckon
darkness envelopes sweet dreams
-manifestation
is a battle to be fought
envision the probable

I love how the quote is a juxtaposition between your two tanka poems, Reena.
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Thank you, Colleen! My understanding was that it is meant to be a separator.
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Yes! I love the way this all came together.
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An intriguing poem. Reena ๐ท๐
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Glad you liked it. Thank you, Robbie!
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So beautiful and deep ๐๐
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Thank you so much, Willow!
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A pleasure ๐
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So well written Reena.
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wonderful Reena! ๐๐
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Thanks!
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