night awaits moonlight
blue skies cover branches
leaves fluttering silently
sunlight bright fading
memories earthly divine
winds serenade dreams
grateful forever roots
roots forever grateful
dreams serenade winds
divine earthly memories
fading bright sunlight
silently fluttering leaves
branches cover blue skies
moonlight awaits night

night awaits moonlight
Sigh. So beautiful 💙
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Thank you so much, Lesley!
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🌒 🌟💙
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Love the words of describing a dusky night. Very visual.
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Thank you so much!
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beautiful. so much feelings expressed. well done.
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Thank you so much!
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Every line is delightful, Reena❣️
~David
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Thank you so much!
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Hi Reena, you did a wonderful job with this poem.
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Thank you so much!
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I feel so tranquil and relaxed reading this – both ways… nicely done
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Thanks a ton! The appreciation of this is overwhelming.
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Beautifully done and a treasure to read!
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Thank you so much for the fulsome praise.
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Oh Reena this is marvelous! I enjoyed it backwards and forwards – a treasure!!
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful imagery, cleverly done. The reversal and shifting and fluttering of words and lines is very effective. The longer I look, the more I see! I especially like the line “roots forever grateful”.
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Thank you so much for the detailed comment, Angela!
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Excellent, Reena. The imagery is lovely and I love how there is a subtle shift in the meaning when reversed.
Thanks for joining in. ❤️
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Thank you, Punam!
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You are so welcome.
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Beautifully done.
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Thank you, D.Avery!
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Wow! You’ve nailed this form, Ma’am. I like the imagery of “night awaits moonlight” and ” moonlight awaits night” 🙂
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Thank you so much, Aishwarya! Means a lot coming from you.
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you make it look easy. 🤩
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The format or the dream? 😃😃
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Beautiful poem, Reena. A perfect reflection.
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Thank you so much!
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Reena, I love this. It reminds me of pictures of trees perfectly reflecting in glassy water.
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Glad you liked it. Thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome.
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I like that last line especially, the moonlight awaiting night.
Jen
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Thank you, Jen! Everybody awaits their chance to shine.
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A lovely poem, and the use of senses to convey message.
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Thank you so much, Diana!
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Lovely, evocative poetry.
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Thank you so much, Linda!
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This poem is very beautiful. The imagery makes me think of a forest late at night back when I was a kid and would play in the woods.
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It’s great to know a poem took you back to a cherished era. Thanks for the appreciation!
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Your welcome!
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Beautiful poem, Reena. I like all the imagery in it.
-David
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Thank you so much, David!
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marvelous work done by you Reena
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Thank you so much, Tanvir!
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Well done Reena. Beautiful stuff. 🙏💜
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Thank you, Nigel!
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Oooohhh well done, Reena. I love this.
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Thanks, Maria!
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beautifully done, Reena🤍
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Thanks, Destiny!
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So beautiful and so well written
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Thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome
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Very clever, Reena… it really works!
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Thank you 😃
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Lovely Reena! ♥️
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Thank you, Ami!
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You are most welcome! ♥️
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