subways have an eerie feel
shafts of light show the path
ascension to light
accelerates the pace
highway tunnels
give other-worldly feel
speed limits remind
of impending civilisation
subconscious imprints
instincts to thoughts
thoughts to action
journeys of the mind
consciousness reigns


You’ve perfectly captured the feeling you get when leaving a subway tunnel. I love the final verse too!
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Thank you, Nicole!
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I feel like you’ve described those minutes in your head when you let the scenery imprint the next thoughts before your subconscious takes over to overflow your head with this and that. Loved it, Reena!
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Thank you! I just moved from the picture to aspects of thought.
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Well done! 🙂
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So lovely and deep.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful lines written and marvellous attempt
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Thank you, Tanvir!
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