barriers
as tall as mountains
obstruct view
cover skies
yet – incorrigible sun
overcomes to rise
Incorrigible
barriers
as tall as mountains
obstruct view
cover skies
yet – incorrigible sun
overcomes to rise
This is a stunning poem Reena! You are so talented!
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Thank you so much, Carol!
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Beautiful
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Thanks again 😊
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Good one, Reena.
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Thanks!
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Rise with sun and start a brand new day every day! Lovely piece, Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome, Reena!
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I think that’s rather nice of the sun. 🙂
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Undoubtedly.
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🙂
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And like the sun we rise too ❤️
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We should keep doing so.
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I am grateful that some things don’t ever change…
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True that. Thanks, Jaye and Anita!
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Be more like the sun and overcome the obstacles.
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Absolutely.
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👍👍👍
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Oooh . This is good. 👏👏👏
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Thank you, Nigel!
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you’re welcome.
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itgood and safe thanks send me more
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