Moon Guide
what lies across
foggy skies?
The day speaks
more than the night
Yet, the absence of light
makes darkness intriguing
worth probing
worth wanting
conversations
Straightforward talk
by an honest Sun
goes amiss
as we get busy
with routines inane
lessons not learnt
unless wrapped in tragedy
and then we hunt
for stark Truth
in mysterious envelopes
-tear them open
though unglued
-invent a tool
to remove knots
from untied ropes
Sun God
sprinkle clouds
on clear skies
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“Straightforward talk
by an honest Sun
goes amiss” — So often the case! Great ekphrastic, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Dora!
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So welcome, Reena.
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beautiful poetry. That penultimate verse was stunning in its flow and depth.
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Thank you so much, Jude!
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“Straightforward talk
by an honest Sun
goes amiss
as we get busy
with routines inane”
This contrast between the sun and the moon, and our willingness and finding opportunities to actually talk is creative and interesting.
Great poem, Reena!
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Thank you so much, Nicole!
Do we really think about the sky or sun in the day, other than weather consideration? It is taken so much for granted.
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A poem, with power in its prose. ❤
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Thank you so much!
I’d like to combine poetry and prose in many ways to create new forms.
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A poem of stark truth. Nobody learns until the worst happens. Even then they commit the same mistake! Well done, Reena.
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Thank you, Mason!
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lessons not learnt
unless wrapped in tragedy
and then we hunt
for stark Truth
such clarity in this line ❤️
I love how your poem arrives at a positive conclusion ma’am.
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Thank you so much, Aboli!
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Love this!!!
💙👍💙
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Thank you, Patty!
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Wow! This is so good Reena. It’s like wandering in a surreal dream. Thanks for joining in.
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Glad you liked it 🤗
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Excellent, Reena!
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Thanks! 🤗
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🙂 brilliant Reena! Love it!
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💐💐
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