She follows no rules
She does what she likes
How do we trust her?
Her temper
so easily spikes
There’s so much at stake
if she is let loose
unstructured society
polluted mindsets
will become a muse
many more will rebel
do what they like
How do we control them?
their temper spikes.
let’s give her a chance
for she’s born to us
let her walk on coals
If she floats then she is not
A witch like we had thought
If she burns herself
let her go
we’ll live in peace
without a show
Who likes confrontations anyway?
she might be stronger than us
let her board another bus

I like what you did here Reena! A fabulous poem well done my friend ❤ Bravo!
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Glad you resonate with it.
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I wonder that we’ll ever overcome the patriarchy – it is again surging in the west like dangerous creature that cannot easily be disposed. I love this – it is indeed somber, but a wonderful write.
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Thank you so much! The vested interests in patriarchy are huge, so the fight remains tough.
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Yes, in for the long haul.
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Isn’t this the way so many look at strong women? Witches, threats. Very well written from the mindset of the small-minded.
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So much of social evil emanates from this mindset. Thanks for resonating with it, Dora!
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My pleasure, Reena. Hang in there, and forge ahead, my friend. 🧡
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🙌
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Do you happen to participate in the Witches vs. Patriarchy community on Reddit or Discord? This poem sounds like it would fit in nicely there.
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No. I don’t. But I would like to check it up. Thanks for letting me know.
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The world need rebels to make order.
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There can’t be a truer statement. They control the rise of dictatorship.
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A great way to use that line! A fine poem …..
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Thank you so much, Helen!
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Rebel with a cause and yet a lyrical rebel.
Beautiful
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Thank you, Shashi!
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genius!
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Thanks 🙏
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I enjoyed this one a lot more than I should. A brilliant portrait, Reena…
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I like you saying ‘more than I should.’ 🤔😊
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Speaks reams, doesn’t it?
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Of course!
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So well written my friend
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Thanks so much!
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Of course 👍🏼
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This is amazing! Disobedience! Unrest! It reads like a song straight out of the genre.
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Thanks a million! 🙂
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