stars are not
aliens
they beckon
all humans
hold my hand
Oh, Comet!
Release me
from planet
the greatest
adventure
awaits in
sky azure
many more
galaxies
friends to meet
learn to speak
languages
-expand soul
energy
-become whole
Universal
stars are not
aliens
they beckon
all humans
hold my hand
Oh, Comet!
Release me
from planet
the greatest
adventure
awaits in
sky azure
many more
galaxies
friends to meet
learn to speak
languages
-expand soul
energy
-become whole
Creative Experiments and More 
This is so nice, Reena! ❤
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Grateful as ever for the engagement 🙏
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Cosmic and beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you, Lesley!
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Wonderful poem, Reena.
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🙏🙏
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Reena you and I were on the same wavelength! I’m so glad I published before reading yours or I’d have scrapped mine and started over!! This is wonderful!!
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Yours is as wonderful 🙌 Thanks for the appreciation!
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I try not to read any poems before I publish 😂 I’d never post a thing
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It makes sense.
I read sometimes if the format is difficult. It helps to know how others have handled it.
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Can be very helpful and inspiring 💗
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Lovely poem using this form!
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Thank you, Christine!
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I love how you work from within us outward into the expansiveness of space.🪐
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Thank you, Melissa!
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I like this method of travel. (K)
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Thanks 😊
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excellent. How gorgeous. I like it. 👏🏽
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Thank you, Selma!
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You’re welcome
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Anything to do with what’s above n beyond grabs my attention. Loved this response to the prompt, Reena..Well done. 👏👏
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Thank you, Nigel!
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Beautiful prose, the galaxy awaits.
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Thank you, Diana!
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❤
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Very good poem Reena
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Hi Reena, this is beautifully done.
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Thanks so much, Robbie!
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💖
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This is amazing! When you think travel, you think big!
I love your poem!
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Thank you so much, Sally! The Earth has been almost covered by tourism. Let’s attack space 🙂
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Wow, Reena, I love this imagery of yours. It strongly evokes a sense of cosmic wonder and longing in my mind.
BTW, I think your rhyme scheme may be slightly off? The second line of each stanza should rhyme with the fourth line of each stanza. (so, for example, in your third stanza, the word ‘adventure’ should rhyme with the word ‘sky’).
Much love,
David
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Okay. Let me see if I can modify the same one or delete this and write another.
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don’t delete this! it’s gorgeous!
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Changed it.
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Ommigosh, that’s actually even better, somehow!
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Thanks, David!
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Reena,
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the wonderful Heather (Sgeoil) is now live!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/02/21/w3-prompt-95-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Thanks!
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*hug*
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