piercing winds of truth
cold like snapped bonds of lost love
yet thawing the frost
May breeze avert cold snowstorms
someone texted me today
Averted
piercing winds of truth
cold like snapped bonds of lost love
yet thawing the frost
May breeze avert cold snowstorms
someone texted me today
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Reena, your addition of the May breeze averting cold snowstorms adds a touch of hope and renewal. This is such a powerful and resonant piece. ❤
~David
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Glad you liked it, David! Thanks so much!
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Oh my goodness… your last line is so perfect! I love the way you were able to use the words. Fabulous!
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Thank you so much, Colleen!
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You’re always welcome, Reena.
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I love the hope in the last line, Reena! Great poem!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Yvette!
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I feel the cold in your words.💜
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Warm up with a drink and some more poetry 😃
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Yes indeed I shall 💜💜
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I hope the “piercing winds of truth” didn’t come from the text! The feeling of the poem is that the text warmed up the frigid air. 🙂 Lovely work.
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Communication thaws relationships 😊 Thank you, Marsha, for communicating 😊
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Thanks for taking the time to share. 🙂
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❤️❤️
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Very touching line the snapped love
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Thank you!
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The last line brought me back to the prior lines. Well done, Reena!
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I hope it revealed a new meaning 😊 Thank you!
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Made me pause for thought. Where I am, it is the breeze, whipping up the snow, that causes the problems. Unless, of course, it’s a warm breeze. I’ll settle there 😊
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Good to know how the weather operates in different parts of the world.
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That’s what I like about the blogging community -the glimpses from around the world.
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🙌
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Yes like others have commented – great ending
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Thanks a lot!
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I also enjoyed that last line. Stay warm!
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Thank you so much!
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Stay warm and stay safe! ❤
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❤️❤️
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The last line is excellent
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Thank you! 😊
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🫶🏼👍🏼
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