colors of cold light
senses getting attuned to
whistling windy winter chill
It’s here on annual duty. It will stay. Winters slow down everything, except the warmth of breath. I’m never more aware of it than now.
rarefied
air on mountain peaks
find yourself

I really got a feel for those wintry winds, from this poem, Reena! Well done, you captured it beautifully!
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Much appreciated, Carol!
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Amazing delectable haibun, Reena. Beautifully profound.
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Thank you so much, Jude!
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Beautiful, Reena! The warmth of breath brings mindfulness (find yourself). Great haibun! 🙂
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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“Find yourself” indeed! Well done. 😊
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Thank you, Gwen!
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Thanks for sharing
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Thanks for the engagement!
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That cold air can wake your mind up for sure!
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Or send you back to bed 😂 Thank you, Lisa!
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🙂
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There is a winter chill at the moment. It is freezing where I live.
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Lucky you 😀 We need to travel to experience chill.
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We do, although the weather is chilly now
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Reena, the reflection on winters slowing down everything, contrasted with the awareness of the warmth of breath, adds depth for me… Well-crafted and evocative!
~David
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Thank you so much, David!
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Reena, I really like the connection you made to the passage of time: “Winters slow down everything, except the warmth of breath. I’m never more aware of it than now.”
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Thank you so much!
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You’re always welcome.
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So well written Reena
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Lovely ❤️
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Thanks!
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Yes true 🙏
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Thanks!
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