cherry-picked emotions
from oceans
of experience
develop an identity
a distinct personality
evolve into a lagoon
with properties of the whole
yet ….
not whole
vibrancy of a lake
lies in guessing
origin of individuality
-a possible metamorphosis
into something
better than the whole

Your so talented Reena! You write exquisite poetry!
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Your appreciation is valued so much. You made my day,
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Ah, love it, the psychology of identity, and where might I go, an open future beckons.
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Yesss 😀 Thank you, pvcann!
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Welcome 🙂
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Good poem, Reena. I liked the metaphors that you used.
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Thank you, Nicole!
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Yes, ever developing!
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And unstoppable 😊
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Absolutely! 🙂
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Beautiful, your lagoon is full of amazing imagery.
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Thanks a ton, Diana!
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💕
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I like the metaphor you’ve used here, and I absolutely love the second stanza. We all have the power to create … ourselves. Just as others see what they choose to see.🩵
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Thank you, Melissa!
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Love this poem.
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Thanks!
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My pleasure
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A wonderful well written poem, Reena. I love the metaphor of personality being a lagoon of individuality.
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Thanks so much!
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You are welcome!
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Reena, your poem effectively delves into the evolution of emotions and identity, offering a thoughtful exploration. Love it!
❤
David
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Thank you, David!
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I love the use of philosophy behind the words and images, it illustrates possibilities in a very gentle yet certain way.
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Thank you, Oloriel!
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And then you discover how beautiful you are inside out ❤️
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Absolutely. Thank you, Aboli!
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You’re welcome ma’am!
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gorgeous imagery 💜
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure 💜
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I love the way you made the lagoon into a metaphor for your own identity.
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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