hollowness
acquires shape
she carries her life
on wispy shoulders
each whiff of smoke
solidifies into grit
she keeps moving
on foggy paths
unsure of the ground beneath
but seeing her limits
in the sky
Grit
hollowness
acquires shape
she carries her life
on wispy shoulders
each whiff of smoke
solidifies into grit
she keeps moving
on foggy paths
unsure of the ground beneath
but seeing her limits
in the sky
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What a wonderful take, Reena. ‘unsure of the ground beneath
but seeing her limits
in the sky’
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Thank you so much, Indira!
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💕💕
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Reena, your poem beautifully embodies resilience amid hollowness. The imagery of carrying life on wispy shoulders and navigating foggy paths is both vivid and evocative.
Lovely!
~David
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Thank you so much, David!
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Beautiful Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure.
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So well expressed, Reena!
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Thank you, Punam!
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“hollowness / acquires shape” is a strong opening image.
Well written, Reena.
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Can’t thank you enough for the constant encouragement 😊
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hollowness acquires shape …life out of nothing.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you, Diana!
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🙂
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Woah, I love the powerful message behind the poem ❤️ Love it, ma’am.
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Thank you, Aboli!
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“But seeing her limits in the sky” such a great line.
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful imagery and strong message, well done.
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Thank you, Mason!
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The sky’s the limit. 🌷
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Absolutely 😍
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Very powerful.. 💪💪 great response to the prompt Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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Love this, Reena!
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Thank you, Chris!
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What a positive and inspiring poem Reena. Loved it. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re most welcome
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A wonderful take on Sadje’s prompt Reena! ❤
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Thank you so much, Carol!
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