It was a day not so bright
When she found her inner light
She gathered the courage to say
This is not what makes my day
impervious eyebrows raised in alarm
her audacity left them less than warm
“Holy fish!” fear gripped their insides
independent thoughts cause landslides
She spoke and wrote, words rained away
Their self-righteousness drained away
“What is it that you want? We gave you the best”
“Stop making demands, and I’ll do the rest.”
Manacled by expectations, she could not deliver
to her commandments – that made them shiver
“Will you talk about us, our deeds not so clean?”
“As long as they affect me, or dull my sheen.”
amongst the stars, she shines bright
shunned by days, banished to nights
from a decimated body, departed her soul
I stay awake to read stories in starlight

A lovely poem, Reena 🩵
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Thank you so much!
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Powerful poem! The last stanza is my favorite 🙂
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Thanks a ton!
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Beautiful poem, Reena. What is IMO, Reena.
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IMO – In my opinion
IMHO – in my humble opinion
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okay. Thanks. ❤️
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Reena I was mesmerized by this poem that reads like a peek into the very soul of a repressed writer! Wowzers! You knocked this one out of the park!
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Thanks a ton! 🏏 😊
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I like the line “words rained away”. Sometimes my words come like a rain storm and other times I can’t write a thing. The words just drizzle. 😦
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IMO, we are just a medium.
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Gosh, that was quick, Reena!
Your poem is beautiful. ❤️ The final stanza is sheer magic. “ I stay awake to read stories in starlight” Wonderful words. 🌟
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Thanks a ton, Lesley! Glad you enjoyed it.
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😊💕
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A beautiful and inspiring story Reena.
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Thank you so much, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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Reena,
This is a poignant journey through resilience and self-discovery. Your words paint a vivid picture of courage and independence, standing out like a beacon in the vast expanse of conformity… Your poem is a captivating ode to individual strength!
❤
David
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Thank you, David!
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Reena, hi! 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the delightful Aboli Mane, is now live!
Enjoy!
Much love 💖
David
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Thanks!
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*hug*
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