Check

illusions
racing against time
wheels spinning
not moving
check adversary motion
who is stuck and where?

10 thoughts on “Check”

Indira says:

December 28, 2023 at 1:49 am

Brilliant.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  December 28, 2023 at 2:20 am
  
  🙌👍
  
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Susi Bocks says:

December 26, 2023 at 4:06 pm

Layers of meaning. Well done, Reena!

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  December 26, 2023 at 10:26 pm
  
  Thanks for seeing through the layers!
  
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  1. Susi Bocks says:
    
    December 28, 2023 at 2:54 pm
    
    My pleasure, Reena! 🙂
    
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Sadje says:

December 26, 2023 at 10:07 am

Profound poem.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  December 26, 2023 at 12:25 pm
  
  Thank you!
  
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  1. Sadje says:
    
    December 26, 2023 at 7:30 pm
    
    You’re most welcome my friend
    
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J M Negi says:

December 26, 2023 at 3:26 am

Meaningful lines indeed, thanks.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  December 26, 2023 at 3:44 am
  
  Thanks again 🙂
  
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