We stand at the edge of something new
A door that opens to a different view
A choice that leads us to a path unknown
A chance that makes us leave our comfort zone
We feel a mix of fear and hope inside
A doubt that questions if we should abide
A thrill that urges us to take the leap
A faith that tells us we have sown to reap
We cross the line that separates the past
A step that marks the end of what we cast
A start that signals the beginning of our growth
A moment that defines the meaning of our oath
We face the challenges that lie ahead
A test that measures how much we have bled
A journey that reveals what we can do
A destiny that waits beyond the threshold

Reena, your poem beautifully captures the essence of stepping into the unknown and embracing change. The rhythm and imagery make it a delightful read, resonating with the shared experience of facing new beginnings. Well done! 🌟💖
~David
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Thanks for the detailed comment! 😊
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Very powerful Reena❤️
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Thank you so much, Mich!
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Gorgeous and deep writing, Reena🙏🏾🖤
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Thanks a ton, Jude!
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A powerful ending made extra good when you didn’t rhyme!
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Actually I couldn’t find a rhyming word to convey the meaning. Thank you, Susan!
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Well, I call that a natural conclusion. Well done!
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Thanks!
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This is fantastic writing..absolutely loved it. 🙏💜
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Thank you so much!
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Anything can happen.
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True. Thanks, Diana!
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Change and perseverance requiring that step into the next adventure. Love this, Well done, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Mason!
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You’re welcome.
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Superb piece, Reena! Brava!
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Thanks a million, Eugi!
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Excellent take, Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure, Reena.
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love this. all change and movement are growth in some way
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Though we don’t always perceive it as growth…. Thank you, Beth!
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A beginning and an end. Lovely
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Thank you so much, Maria!
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You’re welcome Reena 🙂
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Splendid 💗
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Thanks!
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so well expressed… this threshold
beautiful, Reena ✨🤍
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Thanks a ton, Destiny!
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Excellent, Reena – very power!
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Thanks a ton!
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A thought provoking poem Reena! New beginnings are a challenge sometimes. Thanks for joining in
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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