I often wondered what stops me – now I know
those accusing eyes, those barbed comments
redirecting unprocessed venom at me
her inadequacy she ceaselessly laments
those accusing eyes, those barbed comments
let her look; she loathes herself so much
her inadequacy she ceaselessly laments
now I know what I need to reject and eject
let her look; she loathes herself so much
I tell myself again – she is dead and gone
now I know what I need to reject and eject
deep imprints on the psyche left by foes
I tell myself again – she is dead and gone
I often wondered what stops me – now I know
deep imprints on the psyche left by foes
redirecting unprocessed venom at me
Let her look….

wow! This was fab Reena! ❤
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You made my day.
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Reena I love the interlocking verses – brilliant!
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Thank you!
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I had a person like that in my life, and she left an imprint, much larger than I used to think.
This is so well written!!
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Thank you so much!
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Golly, so good, Reena. Thanks for participating. xoxo Happy Holidays.
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Thanks, and wishing you the same! ❤️❤️
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Love the form. beautifully written Reena, I can relate to this
💞Suzanne
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Thank you so much, Suzanne!
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The form of your poetry really emphasises the power she had over you. Excellent!
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Thank you so much!
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WOW! This is poetry!
Much love to you, Reena!
❤
David
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Thank you so much, David!
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Hi, Reena! ❤
Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the lovely ladysighs, is now live:
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Thanks for the reminder 🙂
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*hug*
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Very nice expression
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Thank you, Gyanesh!
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Powerful indeed, thanks.
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Thank you!
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We are the biggest critic especially when aimed at our heart.
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Insightful comment!
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I know I would be able to give advice to other people, but not myself.
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😜
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Wow, very powerful!
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Thanks a ton!
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So good Reena. This was exceptional.
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Glad you think so. Thank you so much!
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You’re most welcome
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Awesome, Reena❣
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Thanks 😊
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You are welcome, Reena 😊
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Superbly written, Reena
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Thank you so much, VJ!
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Welcome
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