Form : Sijo
Kigo: Birds head south and autumn sky
Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge – 24 seasons
what do these shops sell when birds head south
alien syllables in
known meters; I need to reconstruct
seasons to get the right shades
of autumn sky in a known language
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Wow, Reena – you just nailed this one. Excellent!
~David
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Thanks a ton 😀
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This is a great write
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Thank you so much!
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Reena, this poem is excellent! You’ve got the kigo words working for you. I love it. Great first line.
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Thank you so much, Colleen!
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You’re so welcome.
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This is great, Reena:)
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Thank you so much, DL Finn!
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Reena, I like your kigo choice and love that first line.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re most welcome.
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Wonderful poem. It made me sit up and take notice. 🙂
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So glad to know that 😀 Thanks a ton!
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Very original and thought-provoking, Reena. 😊
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Thank you so much, Gwen!
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Well it’s very impressive 💜💜
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🙏🙏
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Well Reena talk about thinking out of the box, that is just brilliant 💜
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Thank you so much! The image shared for Photo Challenge on MLMM acted as the muse 😊
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Excellent take Reena
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re most welcome
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Brilliant take on the prompt, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re most welcome, Reena!
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