What lies at the other end
drives me round the bend
happy to cross the threshold
paint futures with strokes bold
but what if a canvas inert
ignores colors, is cold and curt
Am I better off where I am now?
Past is closed, let the future be slow
My subconscious still holds the brush
Paints my dreams, but is not a rush
It gives me time to process change
Overcome fears, experience the range
I find myself on the other side
Time helps me stand, but lets me slide
I’m here, maybe not of my own volition.
All done and dusted, welcome transition.

Sooo beautifully deep and wise. Let us move forward towards the future ❤️❤️
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Glad you liked it, Sanaa! Thank you so much!
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“but what if a canvas inert
ignores colors, is cold and curt”
I love these lines.
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Thank you so much, Melissa! We often forget the role of the canvas in a painting.
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To be in such transitions is very much the same for me. This week is the first week when I neither go to work or have vacation. I just have to find my new way to self-employ.
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All the best 👍
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I love the way this feels…
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Thank you, Sassy!
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Finding A Place With No Category No Label
Really No Place At All Except Savoring the Present
Gift of Breath Yet it Always Leaves Room For More
Dance And Song Freeing
Soul From Chains
of Before
ReTiRinG
Always More Tread
For the Wheels of Life
As Long As Creativity Dances
And Sings Free Dear Reena Saxena With SMiLes
Yes SMiLes After Writing 12 MiLLioN Words of EPiC Long
Form Poetry For “SonG oF mY SoUL” in A Decade Along
With Public Dancing 18,717 Miles Now in Close to A Decade too
An August Month of Anniversaries Yet What Do Titles And Numbers
Mean When Just Inhaling Peace Exhaling LoVE iN Present Gift New
Of A Dance
And Song
NoW iN Flow
Free Always
Transitioning
Waves Higher and Lower One Ocean Water
RiSinG FaLLinG A New Creation Still to come
It’s Left me No Room to ‘Soul Age’ A Decade SaMe
Root Leaf Living Tree Branching Out to Rise More Breathing..;)
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👏👏
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☺️
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“My subconscious still holds the brush
Paints my dreams, but is not a rush”
This is so real in the transitioning process
Much💖love
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Thank you so much, Gillena!
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I love the layout and the rhyming of your transition poem, Reena, and the painting metaphor is perfect. I especially love the lines:
‘My subconscious still holds the brush
Paints my dreams, but is not a rush’.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure!
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“Time helps me stand, but lets me slide…” 👌
a beautiful flow of thoughts, Reena… deep 🤍
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Thank you, Destiny!
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It does take some time to deal with changes, and sometimes our subconscious minds help or guide us. Thank you for sharing and writing to the prompt!
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Thank you, Merril!
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You’re welcome!
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Awesome poem
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Thank you so much!
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You’re most welcome
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