sharp, slanting, cutting showers pierce
-a force fierce
on-your-face, unconcealed attempt
-rain’s contempt
drenches resistance, will-power
-vile showers
wiping off past with erasers
I let rainwater blend with tears,
releasing resentment of years
a force fierce, rain’s contempt and vile showers
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Love the theme of letting go in this poetry form.
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Thank you, Grace!
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Strong imagery! Well done! ❤️
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Thank you so much!
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Rain is very good at cleansing our souls…
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True. Thanks so much!
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🌧🌧
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very nicely done Reena – loved these lines
“I let rainwater blend with tears,
releasing resentment of years”
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Thank you, Laura! The last stanza needed to change the direction.
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Strong feelings Reena – better out than in…
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Thank you, Frewin!
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Very moving poem.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure
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