when shadows come first, what do they say
they inspire solid structures which won’t sway
I need to know where the shadows come from
What is their past? What games do they play?
they inspire solid structures which won’t sway
I want to touch that invisible latent force
What is their past? What games do they play?
Where does the sun shine, if this is a ray?
I want to touch that invisible latent force
before blessings leave us or change course
Where does the sun shine, if this is a ray?
Who will unravel the powers at play?
before blessings leave us or change course
when shadows come first, what do they say
Who will unravel the powers at play?
I need to know where the shadows come from

Thia is very interesting form of poetry, Reena, repeating the secon line. Excellent take, as usual.
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It’s a pantoum.
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Clever, well crafted poem.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome x
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A thought provoking poem Reena. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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