molten
orange
glides on landscapes
sun’s
last assignment
complete
it
retreats
night
breathes heavy and
golden evenings
deplete
Chosen form is Golda
A 12 line titled poem.
It is syllabic: 2/2/4/1/4/2/1/2/1/4/4/2
It is rhymed: xxxxxaxxxxxa
It may be centered or not.
Written for
Creative Experiments and More 
Very nice. My grandmother’s name was Golda, so I’ll remember this. I love your first lines, “molten orange glides on landscapes.” It does glide, doesn’t it? Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Marsha! Glad you liked it.
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Well done, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome, dear!
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Excellent, Reena! The Golda is fun ~ I’ve played with it before 😀
Much love,
David
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Yes, using less syllables challenges you. Thank you, David!
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👍🏻
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Beautiful 💜
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Thank you, Willow!
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What a pretty poem! The form is so interesting. I find the forms with super short lines like that quite difficult.
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Thank you, Luanne!
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Reena, you are welcome!
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It’s a magical time, the transitions between day and evening (and evening to day.)
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Enjoy 🤗 Thank you, Lisa!
Meanwhile, I’ve replaced the link on FF. Thanks again for letting me know.
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You’re welcome x 2.
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Amazing, from start to finish. Bravo!
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Thanks a ton, Jay!
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I like your synonym word choice, Reena. It shows that we don’t have to be so very literal with the words. This came out beautifully!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re so welcome.
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Stunning piece, Reena, and I love this form of poetry.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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Beautifully written. ❤️
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful imagery, Reena! “night / breathes heavy” Love it!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks a ton, Yvette!
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