a stab in the back
not always treacherous
-someone’s assertion of independence
inability to hit you on the face
you never made them feel free to do so
a difference of opinion
a parting of ways
-the last gasp for breath
before relationships die
The other side
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Nicely done, Reena.
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Thank you, Bill!
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A profound perspective here, Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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Brilliant poem.
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Thank you so much!
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No worries
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Not a happy time. Good capture of a sad time.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat!
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This is a thought provoking poem.
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Glad you think so.
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👍🏼
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Sometimes it’s better for things to end .. rather than to let them dither over the passage of time .. sigh…
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True. Thank you, Sanaa!
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