Earth – so humbly silent
not boasting of its treasures
it lets the sky show off
shiny roofs at night
Stardust in you
inconspicuously matte
-it takes human effort
to bring out luster
-compete with the skies
-give them a floor
to rest egos
Earth – so humbly silent
not boasting of its treasures
it lets the sky show off
shiny roofs at night
Stardust in you
inconspicuously matte
-it takes human effort
to bring out luster
-compete with the skies
-give them a floor
to rest egos
As my mom used to say, “to each, their own.”
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True. Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome, Reena ❤
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A charming poem mixing Earth, ego, and the universe. Well done, Reena.
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Thank you, Bill!
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How wonderful. Earth quietly waiting in the wings while the sky is the true star. I love this.
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Thank you so much!
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Give them a floor to rest egos … perfect!
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Thank you, Helen!
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Excellent! Your posts give joy!
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Thank you, Rei!
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Intriguing first line. Makes me think about whether the Earth is not so humbly silent
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It should spark another poem 🙂 Thank you!
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Those ‘shiny’ egos insult humble Mother Earth at every turn.
Well played!
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Thank you, Susan!
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Reena – this super clever – I’d never thought of it this way before…
❤
David
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Poetry makes you think 🙂 Thanks, David!
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I love the idea of Earth ‘humbly silent’ letting the sky show off, Reena!
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Thank you, Kim!
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Maria!
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Lovely lines penned
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Thanks!
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Very nice.
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Thanks!
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My pleasure
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