David from skepticskaddish.com inspired me to try the Cleave format.
I’ve done two tankas instead of two shadormas.
You can read it as two separate tankas placed vertically, or a single poem left to right.
Written for What do You See hosted by Sadje
Animal love
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Awww poor ponies. Great entry though, well done. KL ❤
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Thank you, KL!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Very sweet poems Reena! I enjoyed both of them!
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Thank you, Carol!
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Wow, this is simply wonderful
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Thank you so much!
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What a clever idea Reena. Love both the poems read together or by themself. A poignant message. Thanks for joining in
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Thank you, Sadje! Credit to David 🙂
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You’re welcome! Yes, David is so good at experimenting with new forms
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oh, this makes me feel sad, Reena! I hadn’t even considered the possibility that they were lonely 😦
beautifully written…
❤
David
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Thank you, David!
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