you don’t care to think how I feel
everything from there goes downhill
what you want – matter of right
my needs buried out of sight
patriarchs – with iron hands
drive freedom around the bend
you don’t care to think how I feel
everything from there goes downhill
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Spot on, Reena!
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Thanks! 🤗
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You’re welcome!
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This part digs deep: patriarchs – with iron hands
drive freedom around the bend
Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you, Grace!
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I love this ❤
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Thank you so much!
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Very well put, Reena! 🙂
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Thank you, Sunra!
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Powerful message and good choice of repeating lines. Patriarchy is the foundation on which so much evil is built 😦
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Very powerful, evocative poem. Full of raw anguish.
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Thank you, Nitin!
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Powerful
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Thank you!
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Always my pleasure
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