adore freshness, understand transitoriness
anything that’s fresh has a short span
frozen smiles in sub-zero climes
as good as Egyptian mummies
anything that’s fresh has a short span
their value shifts on a long ride
as good as Egyptian mummies
salute them for joys they spread
their value shifts on a long ride
know where they started, how you met
salute them for joys they spread
write a new story, see in a new light
know where they started, how you met
adore freshness, understand transitoriness
write a new story, see in a new light
frozen smiles in sub-zero climes
Creative Experiments and More 
The repetition of lines reinforces the thoughts. Really like this form.
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It is a pantoum. Thank you, Linda!
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Well done on this form. I enjoyed the repeated lines that add a sense of determined mood. Well for me it does.
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Repetition is a part of the Pantoum format. Thank you, James!
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Well-chosen lines for your pantoum, Reena. The day of freshness steps towards death… to be born again… and again…
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Thank you, Lisa!
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Very nice, Reena.
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Thank you, Bill!
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I like how the structure of your poem illustrates the outcome ‘write a new story, see in a new light’. Clever.
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Thank you, Penny!
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