Oceans in the mind Posted on November 20, 2021November 22, 2021 by Reena Saxena water is not blue it flaunts colours of sky skies are an illusion the world basks in filtered light reflections galore conclusions galore Our minds being ultimate reflectors -partial absorption changes the world and how we see it Weekend Writing Prompt #236 – Blue Share this: Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp TweetLike Loading...
This is wonderful and very reflective. Takes a few readings to fully absorb it though. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thank you so much! The beauty of the abstract in poetry is everyone derives a different meaning from it. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
A great little poem about truth and reality, Reena. Scientific, even. Very well done, as I see it. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
salt waters ocean s daughters slake the thirst not swell and fade do tell! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
This is wonderful and very reflective. Takes a few readings to fully absorb it though. 🙂
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Thank you so much! The beauty of the abstract in poetry is everyone derives a different meaning from it.
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Yes! VJ nailed it!
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Thank you! 😊
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Welcome!
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A great little poem about truth and reality, Reena. Scientific, even. Very well done, as I see it. 🙂
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Thank you, Bill!
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You’re welcome.
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“partial absorption” – therein lies the rub.
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Bang on! 🥵🥵
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salt waters
ocean s daughters
slake the thirst
not swell and fade do tell!
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I’m still stuck at the first stanza
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Move ahead 😃
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I did, this poem makes me soul-search. Beautifully written
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Thanks again 🙂
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