Scratch the Surface

scratch
the
surface,
go beneath
See - hurt lays buried
it sparked off rebellion - got you
labelled, while the perpetrators got away scot free

13 thoughts on “Scratch the Surface”

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2. Ugly truth of life! Fantastic take.

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   1. Thank you, Punam!

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      1. My pleasure, Reena.

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3. anger the danger
   beat him to the punch
   took the ball
   and that was all

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4. Reblogged this on Keep it alive and commented:
   First in this week; Enjoy Reena’s take on this week’s prompt. A succinct take on this image.

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   1. Thanks for the share!

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      1. It’s a pleasure

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5. This is good Reena. Love the simplicity of your poem. A profound message. Thanks for joining in

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   1. Thank you, Sadje! Wishing you a Merry Christmas 🎶💃❤️🌺🌲🥂

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      1. You’re welcome 😉

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6. Very stark. I like it!

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   1. Thank you, Chris!

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