time is money takes us on scalar lines however what is precious is relative to what happened before or after countable is easy uncountable too vague to talk about And we confine our existence to pre-existing frameworks time moves on finite in small capsules floating on oceans of infinity bypassing human understanding of expansiveness and limits
Time


Time is relative… I can feel this especially when I’m so late to read the poetry on my own prompt-
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IMO, poetry does not go well with deadlines 😀
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I love where time took you on this one. This line is great…
time moves on
finite in small capsules
floating on oceans
of infinity
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Thank you so much, Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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So true, all of it. I particularly like these lines:
“finite in small capsules
floating on oceans
of infinity”
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Thank you, Lisa.
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You’re welcome, Reena.
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“however
what is precious
is relative to
what happened
before or after”
wow. this poem contains nuggets of freedom.
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Thank you so much!
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Really enjoyed this, especially how you illustrated the progression of time. Clever.
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Thank you, Helen!
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Your last stanza says it all! Brilliant take, Reena.
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Thank you ☺️
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I especially like the last stanza.
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Thank you so much!
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Hi Reena, I am a day late getting around to reading everyone’s work, but I really enjoyed this poem of yours. Well written.
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Thank you so much, Rob!
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Oh well done, Reena! love the philosophical roller-coaster that forces us to say we don’t really understand time at all.
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Thank you, Dora!
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You’re so welcome 🙂
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I haven’t gotten down how this challenge works really, I did a google and then that was it. Looking at your helps understand but doesn’t simplify by any means. This is very good!
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Google, note down the options it throws up and weave the words into a poem. It is all that I’ve done.
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